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FIRST-PREVIOUS-NEXT

Balance, a fragile thing to keep, even harder to repair it once it's off.
Dark and light, good and bad, what stops us from going out of this balance and choose
either one.
And sometimes it just needs one little push and the balance breaks.

Ladies and gentlecolts, I'm proud to present my first self made story.
Hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoy making it

Equilibrium (c) :iconsaturnstar14:
MLP (c) Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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:iconsweetymimy22:
sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner May 12, 2017
Say are you still continuig the story
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:iconthe-purplepony:
Huh so… just to Be clear… are you saying that Discord made a reverse elements of harmony… hmm interesting… like why does he need them what good would they do for Discords cause.… very,very, interesting 

nut anyway I love this First page it already establishes story the art is nice it's all great!
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rosepetal179 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017
that is pretty cool! I love that story! hope it gets better and better!
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry to disappoint if it's not that much yet.
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:iconrosepetal179:
rosepetal179 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017
its okay. youre just starting to make the story happen.
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eleventhpolicebox Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAYY SUCH GOOD PLOT :3
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:iconmaverickwolfzx:
Maverickwolfzx Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016
Well, let's see.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2016
I'd imagine Lazy Flank isn't popular with the rest of the crew. I'm sure it must be terribly vexing when you've riled up a bunch of ponies to go out and do evil only to have her come along and make them decide that doing evil sounds like a lot of work.
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bluebunny84ppg Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
They're all earth ponies?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup, but their "magic" comes from somewhere else.
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bluebunny84ppg Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Like...
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not gonna spoil ya :p
But let's just say they're not normal ponies so they don't have normal magic.
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bluebunny84ppg Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Aha...
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:iconbiancaroseg:
biancaroseg Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhh
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flutter-butter55678 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Pride should be Arrogance....NOT SAYING ANYTHING BAD ABOUT THIS THIS IS AWESOME
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2015
I wow, i forgot about this story
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:iconmr-blitz:
Mr-Blitz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just got into this thanks to your latest page. ^^;
For your first original story I see a lot of potensional in this. Keep it going! ^^
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope I can make it into something with potential, because the initial idea sounds good but getting the story on paper is so hard >.<
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:iconmr-blitz:
Mr-Blitz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If it makes it any better, I sometimes suffer from the same issue. I get an initially great idea but with my lack of skills getting the story rolling is hard. Even if I could draw quickly enough doing 10 pages alone is though enough. But don't worry. You'll have our feedback all the time I believe you can do it! ^^ It doesn't have to be 100 pages either. :P
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope I can atleast make it a few chapters long ^^ and get to atleast the point I have in my head.
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:iconmr-blitz:
Mr-Blitz Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have faith in you. x3
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:iconmarinus18:
marinus18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
so it's 7 against 6.
Do you consider yourself christian?
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:iconsaturnstar14:
SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Look at the cover art and you'll see it's even.

I've been raised a christian but I don't consider myself one.
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marinus18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
It's not the mane 6. I see Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy (and I think Rainbow Dash) but I don't see Applejack or Pinkie Pie. there are also 3 ponies I've never seen before. (that is RD... right?)

same thing for me.
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
On the cover art there is the sins on top and then the mane six + one on the lower belt
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:iconmarinus18:
marinus18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
I don't see Pinkie Pie and I see 4 unicorns (3 if Twilight is an alicorn) so how does that work?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
On the cover, in order from left to right because you can clearly not see what others easily can:
Gluttony, Pride, Envy, Wrath, Sloth, Lust and Greed on the upper belt
Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Sunset Shimmer, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy and Rarity on the lower belt.
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marinus18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
since when is Pinkie Pie a unicorn?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The thing you see as her "horn" is that little mane flick she has on her forehead...
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LEArayann Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Pride looks so evil without eyes :o (Eek) 
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:iconlollipopflower:
lollipopflower Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
That's why you designed those ponies!
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:iconmaleticanimewatcher:
MaleticAnimeWatcher Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
but them the ponies of virtues will save the day, just totally dumb here
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Dekra234 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
grrr
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DarkJesterFox Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
So far so good...
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
A promising beginning. :)
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Articunos-Bitch Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
Intriguing. I do not like 'Discord is the ultimate evil' and most of the Sins bore me, except Pride. Let's see where this goes.
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Madness-Made-Fresh Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
This is great! It reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist only ponies and definitely not as violent. Can't wait for more!
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sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student General Artist
oooooh
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Drakenhof Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
Very interesting plot
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joeyrock76 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
great story dud , cant wait to hear more :)
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooh... That's a very good intro! Never knew that Discord could need such an awesome army!
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, every good villain needs his minions
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Agreed.

And I have a feeling that if Sombra were to return, he'd have some followers that would either resemble the Foot Ninja or the Death Eaters. What do you think?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm I have no idea actually,
I think Sombra would make an army of his own too, like crystal zombies (bit like creepers from minecraft in my opinion)
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, those could work, too. But he'd needs smart minions; loyal lieutenents to help him control his army.
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:iconsonggirl46:
Songgirl46 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
Interesting! I'll read this!
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:icondiannaria:
Diannaria Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
So, Lazy Flank is a strong neuroleptic xD
Nice start !:)
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Hotspot0626 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
Cool! The story begins! :D
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bebo8096 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice!
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