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Past Sins: All Hail The Queen P1 by SaturnStar14 Past Sins: All Hail The Queen P1 by SaturnStar14
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Past Sins and Nyx (c) :iconpenstrokepony:
MLPFIM (c) Hasbro, :iconfyre-flye:
In honor of :iconrussiankolz: because he made a very awesome fancomic after the facts of this story
but he sadly left DA or changed his account

Little explanation with panel 9 from the story:

 "The “royal” family of Equestria was actually the royal lines of the earth ponies, pegasi, and unicorns from the old country combined into one. When Celestia and Luna saved Equestria from Discord and took over the duties of raising and lowering the sun and moon, the populace of the kingdom was overjoyed. The two sisters were seen as saviors, and ponies across Equestria called out for them to rule. This, of course, horrified the old royal families, but with the kingdom recovering from Discord’s reign they couldn’t, and didn’t, want to fight a civil war.

So an agreement was made. The royal lines merged and adopted Luna and Celestia, who then became the high princesses of Equestria and rulers of the kingdom. The members of the new, singular royal family became minor princes and princesses, in effect lords and ladies. They handled the day-to-day ruling of different counties in Equestria, and, despite their often overinflated egos, it was a system that had successfully governed the country for centuries."

I wanted to add this as a small page inbetween these but I'm deciding to just put it in the description.

Non-animated version:
Page1 by SaturnStar14


<<Prelude
<<Chapter 1
<<Chapter 2
<<Chapter 3
<<Chapter 4
<<Chapter 5
<<Chapter 6
<<Chapter 7
<<Chapter 8
<<Chapter 9
<<Chapter 10
<<Chapter 11
<<Chapter 12

<<Previous - Next>> 

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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2016
But she didn't promise not to fight Nyx alone.

Nor should she. Were she to find Nyx in Manehattan, she might not be able to avoid fighting her immediately, or it might be severely unwise to wait.
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
The winds of change are coming... for the better... or the worse
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darthrivan Featured By Owner Edited Dec 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Confused. They are sending entire armies out to search for this cult? That's not very effective. A presence like that makes groups like these go to ground. I know it's of the utmost importance to find them, but small, quiet investigations would make for a more effective search method. Which will draw more attention? The cautious mouse or the stampeding elephant?
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Mermain123 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmmmm she didn't promise....
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:iconjmcdavid:
jmcdavid Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016
Interesting bit of world-building you did there. I like it.
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BOOOOOOM5 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2016
Problem is, it's slow and tedious to get paperwork to the top.
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What do you mean? About the princes and princesses? That's all Penstroke's stuff :p
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:iconjmcdavid:
jmcdavid Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016
Ah. Been a while since I read the original story, so I forgot about that. :iconsweatdropplz:
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:iconsaturnstar14:
SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You won't ever see anything original from me with this story ^^
The only time I changed something was a character but I forgot he was a unicorn and not a pegasus xD was a background character tho.
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Dudette5030 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Student General Artist
I just reread the comic from the beginning, and I have to say: you've improved a lot since starting!  

Keep up the good work! :D
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
And I try to keep improving every time!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The hunt is on!
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Dreamingartist101 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I really love how you've been adding the small animations! It just really gives this extra effect of sound and motion! 
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :3 Yeah I like them too and it sometimes gives something extra in a panel where movement is a key xD
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tigreanpony Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016
This is getting really good, keep up the great work.
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JustJoeKing Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016
>8/..... ain't nothin better not happen to Tia in her sleep.... *sniff*....
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:iconuber-dan:
Uber-Dan Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
The idea of fiefdoms and minor princes and princesses is interesting.
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:iconlydiajuice:
lydiajuice Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Great chapter, loved the animation :)

*edit*, forget my spelling errors lol

Oh boy, looks like things are only going to get worse.
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Drakenhof Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
It isn´t
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's not...
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:iconcadancefayle:
cadancefayle Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Student Digital Artist
In panel 9 Celestia's mane looks a bit weird.
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How is it weird? Maybe a bit wide at some part.
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diverseinterests47 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
I see what they mean.  Normally, Tia's mane slims down as it gets further to the tip.  In panel 9, it widens as it goes down.  Just a nitpick though, the page still looks good.
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, it shows movement? :D
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:icondiverseinterests47:
Good point.  

Edit: Panel 4.  Tia and Lulu are best sisters.  =D
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MelonSeed11 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
BTW, I'm loving how you're drawing Luna and Tia! They both look great :D
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MelonSeed11 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ummm in panel 8, what's a "Fiefdom"? Is it a spelling error, or does it mean something? 
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A fiefdom is like a smaller kingdom or county or estate or property that's underneath a king/queen in this case.
It's like in the medieval ages where a baron or count got a piece of land from their king and they ruled over that but they still had to answer to their ruler.
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MelonSeed11 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooooh! Thanks for the info~
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Raykiller567 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
here comes the epicness 
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Madness-Made-Fresh Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Professional Filmographer
Loving this!
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:iconblazeheartpanther:
BlazeHeartPanther Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Student General Artist
What is a Fiefdom?
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:iconsaturnstar14:
SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Medieval History. the land over which a person exercises control after vows of vassalage and service to an overlord."
I don't really know how to explain it properly xD
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:iconblazeheartpanther:
BlazeHeartPanther Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Student General Artist
So in other words. its a kingdom all to themself?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a kingdom still owned by Equestria but Cadence answers to Celestia and Luna.
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BlazeHeartPanther Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Student General Artist
ah, ok. I didn't get the explination I guess #^^#
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
i like the idea of "lesser royals" governing other areas of Equestria. Though i think the Crystal Empire is technically a separate country, with Shining Armor and Cadence as its rulers. They are of course, on the best of terms with Equestria with Celestia being Cadences "aunt"
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tom117z Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
And here we are, one of the darkest chapters of the story. But, at the same time, this is the deepest pit the story delves into and there is only up from here!
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PhoenixFlambe Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
Who might those princes and princesses be?
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Description please.
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BB-K Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They can see where to go, but surely Nightmare Moon and any other evil forces can also be found in Everfree Forest, it's another location where evil can hide. And the ruined castle it the perfect place.
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SgtTex Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016
If there was only one fan story I could make canon in MLP it would be Past Sins, no question about it.

By the way your art has always looked great on these, but in my opinion it does get better over time.
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SaturnStar14 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I try to get better and better each time :)
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